Monday, July 11, 2005

Plaigarism if that's what you think!

I made another on the spot poem. This time I was all bored out of editing my old poems I made years ago. Where the ones I made are completely out of the way. I mean the poem is a total mess. No heart in it. So I'd rather made a new one than spend the day editing it. Well as I was making this on the spot poem thing I was just inspired by Wolfgang's She is My Cain song coming from their Acoustica Album. (Released last 2001) Ok, I'm gonna admit that some lines came from the song but then I don't think this is a plagarism. Well since I made the 95% of the lines here. You be the judge. Here's the poem.


She is My Cain

She is my life
She if my love
She is my hope
She is my world
Her domain where I can be whoever I want to be

I can't explain
It is so plain
She is my Cain

She is my light
She is my sanctuary
She is my day and night
She is my eyes
Her view is such a blissful sight

I can't explain
So unreal, so unexplainable
She is my Cain

She is my fervor
She is my bliss
She is my plush
She is my lust
Everything I need is in her, but everything she needs, is not in me

I can't explain
Why my life is mysteriously blurry
And she is my Cain

She is my vain
She is my pain
She is my scar
She is my fear
I was betrayed by my blindness and foolishness. I want it to end

Now I know
What she means to me
She is my Cain

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